The poem : the sun way
the sun rise up so bright
blinded my eyes of you
sun shine through my eyes
did I ever know you
under the sun
many memory remind me
the sun flower who waited
for a sunny day
its went dusk
from the day you forget to water
the sunflower
the softness of your word
became a thorn grow on the beautiful red rose
when tourch it ,can be painful
the sun way too bright too far to been seen
when dawn come,the smile of your face
become dimness
feel like fall into the fog of doubt
when nightfall there no light
to see
to reply on
I saw a light
but now gone
the way of sun end
within my bless and wish of you
dont forget again.....
writer: L
“8/10/2009”
Actually this poem got a hidden meaning,but i guest no-one will know ....maybe my friend Satthia will know the hidden meaning about it....
This poem was make at the begin of my add drop week....
The aspiration of this of this poem , actually come from a comic i read on onemanga....
I kinda pround v tis poem,but if there any grammer mistake or wrong word or unknown meaning thing...pls tell , feel free 2 giv comment....cos....my english is lousy=0=
